I hate to ask this much of people, but I've written 56 pages of a screenplay (I started on it an an adv. screenwriting camp I attended about a month ago). I'm trying to find some people to take a look, so I can get some honest opinions. So far the two people I've shown it too (both very close friends) have been very positive, but all I can find is flaws. If anyone would be willing to take a look, please give me your email address and I'll send it. Thank you in advance.

I PMed you. <p><!--EZCODE HR START--><hr /><!--EZCODE HR END-->Cut! That was perfect!</p>

I PMed you too. <p><!--EZCODE CODE START--><pre> <!--EZCODE HR START--><hr /><!--EZCODE HR END--></pre><!--EZCODE CODE END-->If you ever drop your keys in a river of molten lava, let 'em go, 'cause man, they're gone.</p>

Damn it, everytime I try to look at my PM's it logs me out. I might try it on my sister's computer.

we have a writing thread somewhere .. if I feel super-motivated today I'll look it out! <p><!--EZCODE HR START--><hr /><!--EZCODE HR END--> "There’s never any time to have too much self-doubt" - Wes Anderson </p>

I'm sorry, I didn't realize there was already a thread for stuff like this.

It's ok, i wasn't reprimanding! I'm such a lazybrain, I didn't get around to it. Anyhoo, probably it's gone since the hacking :rolleyes <p><!--EZCODE HR START--><hr /><!--EZCODE HR END--> "There’s never any time to have too much self-doubt" - Wes Anderson </p>

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I wrote a screenplay too a few months ago and I would love to share it with all of you to get some honest criticism and insight instead of the always positive ones you get from friends, but the number one rule is to never put your screenplay on the internet because then (and I'm not talking about the racers here, but just in general) any one can take your idea as their own.

Anyway mines about 114 pages and it's a dark comedy like paul thomas anderson's humor that unfolds in a greek like tragedy. I'm still always editing it in my spare time and I'm starting a new one soon.

But hey, I'd love to read yours if the internet doesn't frighten you like it does me. Just PM me, I love reading screenplays and I'd help you out if you want. <p>------------------------------------
Perhaps a lunatic is simply the minority of one</p>

Im studying to be a film script writer and I have written a script, and Im finishing another one. But its in Spanish. Should I translate it to English?

They are shorts. Like 10 minutes.